The Is-Kid and the Death Defies

So I've been writing this novel for a few months now and I was wondering if any of you would be interested in reading it. It's not very good but I'm still proud of it. It's called "The Is-Kid and The Death Defies" and it's been written totally by me, by myself. So here's the blurp/synopsis:

Earth in 2058 is dying. Trees and plants are wilting, animals are going extinct and water is drying up. Mankind has been brainwashed by Dr Is and his company, Feel Better Inc, who specialize in making drugs to keep you thin, beautiful and young. His factories took over whole towns and polluted the Earth to within an inch of it's life. Now just a handful of people are left to stop Dr Is and ultimately save the planet. But are the Death Defies too late?

Chapter One- http://storywrite.com/story/8879259-The_...._2058-by-Capsha
Chapter Two- http://allpoetry.com/poem/8963099-The_Is....proof-by-Capsha

Cool I'd love to check it out when I'm not so blasted busy... arg finals.